In my writing class, I saw the presentation of Adora Svitalk. Even if she is a child, she present her opinion to lots of audiences. She claim that adults should learn from children. I think she is really brave and she has her own strong opinion.
Nowadays, many people just follow the rules and do not think creatively. They don't try to break the rules and it blocks their new ideas. They just blame themselves, like I can't do it, it is impossible, I don't have time. However, the children is different. They are free at thinking and they think positive. There are nothing to stop their valuable thinking. If anybody who stop it, it maybe adults. I really agree on her arguments. The children get a lot of effect from their parents. Therefore, it is problems. They just follow their parent's advice and opinion. Even if they are creative at children, they become strict adults again. There are no development and just do same things again and again.
Therefore, I think adults should not pressure their own opinion to children. They should talk with them, share various information with them and learn from them. Adults and children both have advantages and disadvantages. If they learn together, I think they can supply their disadvantages and make their advantages stronger. For example, there were contest about decorate glass. Most people just make it simple with few decoration, but children are different. They think creatively and change the shapes of glass, like snake and bacon boy. It gives many inspiration to adults.
In conclusion, today I am too glad that watched the presentation of Adora Svitalk. It makes me thinking about adults and children again.
FINAL ESSAY ASSIGNMENT
12년 전
From your response, I can clearly tell that you have understood and thought about Miss Svitak's presentation. You have presented your thoughts in a well written way. Very good work.
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